david carson

today we had looked at david carson and through looking at his work we made a piece similar to 1 of them we liked














I created this piece

I had created this with a a lot of text I did not have anything that was relevant to the piece so I just typed random letters soon as I had thought it did not matter we had to come up with a catch line for the piece I had chosen look who's alone now because it had suited the look of the image I had made the curves with a  dynamic shaped brush and painted  to try and create the texture with it however I don't think that my technique looks like the same image or close really however it can be improved by if i used an angle jitter and shape jitter to get the hands  and the text could be closer by adding another layer of text and overlay them so that they overlap each other




This is his original that I had attempted to recreate
After comparing the two I feel like I had failed in recreating the texture because I didn't know what technique  had been used to recreate the texture that I didn't succeed in creating however after evaluation this I now believe that I can recreate a image similar to the original

 

my second attempt at the version this is much better because the texture is much more accurate the color scheme matches more however to improve it further I would need a black and white image in the top left and a title for the bottom right